The Unknown Uzumaki

Tell me what you think, if I get a lot of positive comments, I will begin chapter 2. Heres half of chapter 1.

The Unknown Uzumaki.
Dj, was his name twin brother of naruto. At 3 years of age he went missing, there wasn't a sight of him any were, many people say that he left the village because he could not simply handle the pain of the nine tail fox demon inside of him. Dj, had got most of the demon, people were imagining how strong he was. Naruto had gotten just a little of the demon and look how strong he became. Another reason the people thought he left the village was that he could not take all the people making fun of him, and hating him, because of that evil spirit inside of him.
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