redhorsemen's poem of Hope

[redhorsemen]

Falling angel

Falling angel I believe that love is my savior
in my time of pain
blinded my love I can't see my angel
I can't escape to the island of mercy
but I smile when I can see her
I have no need for mercy anymore
a angel is falling it gives me mercy
every day I see the angel in my time of pain
but the angel is stealing my pain
and giveing me hope
this angel is the angel of hope but I call this angel....

 

[nanni]

you did something meaning full now
how does it feel?

 

[AbnormallyNormal]

try not to repeat the same words over and over in a poem
the key is variety and SUGGESTION