Naruto [392] 04-05 *Yes, 2nd colouring today, I was very busy*

Moritaka

Moritaka

Use your Sharingan!
Ok, so here's my second colouring today of this Double-sided manga side (lol?)

I tried really hard with the eyes, if you full view in DA, you'll see the detial I put in them. I lacked at the Orochimaru eyes :( but I suppose I made up for that. Well, here it is with all it's crappiness:

Ok, here it is in deviantart:
Psyren 13 by Binktopia

Please comment and give me contructive criticism... Not just criticism.
Oh and I see that the image is very small, I'll try and jazz it up, but for now, just use the current one.

EDIT
Ok, I'm gonna cell shade a page or two of the next chapter. Ya know.. DD style...hehe... anyways, hope you guys'll post back again and send me another batch of advanced critique? These pages really helped me with my development and how I can fix a few problems.
 
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Like it! All these different colourings are making me wonder what Susano-o's official colour is going to be :LOS
 
Thanks a lot Para!
By the way weren't you the one who suggested the "Sexin-the-Konoha" thing?
 
Pretty good job but you should darken the purple on Orochimaru's eye. It really sticks out on Sasuke's face.
 
It looks pretty nice! The color choices are great, and the shading looks well done. Keep up the good work ^^
 
you're the first person i see who coloured itachi's eyes whitey-blue.
i personally think he's gone completely blind now, don't you guys think so too?
why others keep colouring them red?

(btw, if u need more comments, nice work here!)
 
Pretty good! The colors are all very sharp, and you did a nice job of texturing.
 
Thanks you guys ;P
I'm surprised you all actually found it this way. I agree about the Oro eyes being a BIT sticking out.. I wasn't sure what to do. I dont know how to make it back to A3, it just came out like this.. I did not alter the size.
And, as for the rest of you..

THANKS
 
bgmimosa said:
you're the first person i see who coloured itachi's eyes whitey-blue.
i personally think he's gone completely blind now, don't you guys think so too?
why others keep colouring them red?

(btw, if u need more comments, nice work here!)
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Because they haven't reverted to black yet. . .so they're still red, techniquley. XD

Waaah . ..so many good comments, and I can't see the pretty picture. ...:scry
 
Over all you have great basic colors. The only color that bugs me the most is Oro's eye. The bright purple is a little too much so I suggest toning it down to a darker gray-ish purple. (oh same thing for the bright blue gem on susano as well.)

Also, if you feel like it, the rocks in the panel with susano, if you go and color each of them individually, I think the outcome will be more effective.

It looks good though! :love I really like the color for Itachi's skin. His hair is also good. Sasuke's dark skin look great as well. Keep coloring!! :X3
 
Yeah, as stated, I lacked at the Oro eye.. I'm gonna work on that. I'm currently working on 8-9 (I think), the one with the Susano'o vs Orochimaru's Hydra technique. As a result of a two hour session, I only got the first panel bas coloured :Cry

So i decided to finish with this issue, although I'll probably go back to it.. Next issue out soon, I'm focusing on that.
 
I actually like this quite a bit. The most interesting part is the second panel, with Itachi. The choice of color you used for his eyes looks great. The only problem I may have with this is the amount Orochimaru's eye stands out. Great job otherwise, though.
 
Interesting colour choice for Itachi's eyes. I feel that the shade of purple that you used for Sasuke's Oro eye is a little too bright, so it stands out a little too much.
 
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