Its really not that bad for a first coloring. It appears to anime-like, but that is by no means bad. The shading on the eyebrows makes it a little difficult to distinguish the eyebrows, but it is good.
Pretty good for a first coloring and agree that you should try and stick to one form of shading for each coloring. The hard shading portion (on his face) looks better than the soft (on his hair). Keep it up!