just hate(poem)



I don't have a soul.
My souless body, I hate it.
It just stands there doing nothing.
staring at me with their black souless eyes.
Do something or just die.
You freak, you monster.
Why do I hate myself?
you in the light.
Give me your soul so I can live.
You can feel my pain if you do.
I want to live a life.

hope you like it.
its a nice powerful theme however you might want to try using alternative words instead of repeating 'soul' so many times
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