Here is another poem that I have written, and shall share with the forum, for everyone here.
This poem has only the vaguest of connections to the book of the same name in that both take their name and inspiration from the mythical figure of Baalzebul, whose name approximately translates to "lord of the flies;" Baalzebul is a demonic being who causes panic and mayhem and rouses people in a frenzy of violence and bloodshed.
The final stanza of the poem is different from the first two because I imagine this poem being the basis of a song that begins slowly and then abruptly increases in speed toward the end, akin to Run to the Hills by Iron Maiden, One by Metallica, or Moonbaby by Godsmack.
What does everyone here think of this poem, do you like it?
Spoiler: Lord of the Flies
The final stanza of the poem is different from the first two because I imagine this poem being the basis of a song that begins slowly and then abruptly increases in speed toward the end, akin to Run to the Hills by Iron Maiden, One by Metallica, or Moonbaby by Godsmack.
What does everyone here think of this poem, do you like it?
