My writing lacks color. Well at least my third person writing. I haven't really read the 1st person. My outlook in life is completely apathetic. I can't say I'm really any of my five senses other then my ears. I need to awaken my senses so that every emotion I have can go out into that story. I hate to say it. But I need to experience people. Because honestly it's what drives a good story. I lack an interesting group in my life. In fact, I could say I hate almost everyone in my life write now. My life is devoid of interesting people. I'm trying to write an adult story in a child's world. You can't just do that. So for now, I think I'll close up shop and grip tight to those plot points as hard as I can and jump into the real world.